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Just some boys being usually hormonal boys! And for Ashley the perfect start to
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Nite Storm
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Eminem, Swifty
and Proof were driving around
“Fuck” Eminem
said pulling the rental car over to the side of the road because it began
smoking
“Damn rental
cars.” Proof said getting out of the passenger side followed by? Swifty and Eminem.
Proof lifted
the hood and the smoke rolled out of the hood.
“Dammit, am gonna call Bizarre and see if he’ll come get
us.” Em said
“Aight.”
~*~
“He said it’ll
take him 45 mins. To and hour to
get here.” Eminem said rubbing his temples
“Fuck what are
we gonna do till then?” Swifty asked
“We can go to
that restaurant.” Proof suggested pointing to a small café type place across
the street
“Dawg am glad that’s there I didn’t even see it.” Eminem
said walking across the road followed by the others. They walked into the
restaurant and sat down in a booth. Then a couple minutes later a cute little
red headed girl wearing a short red and white checked uniform came up to them
handed each of them a menu.
“Can I get you
guys anything to drink?” she said with a cute little southern accent.
“Uh…I wanna
coke.” Proof said
“And, a uh mello yello
for me.” Swifty said looking at his menu. Eminem sat still staring at her; she
looked at him and smiled. He tried to smile back
“Dude…” Proof
kicked him from under the table
“Ouch…fuck
man. Oh uh, I wanna coke.” he said looking out the window
“Ok” she said
writing it all down “I’ll be right back to take your orders.” she said smiling
and then walking away
“Em, could you make yourself more fuckn
obvious man.” Swifty said watching her ass as she walked away
“What?” Eminem
asked innocently
“You were checkin that lil southern bitch
out.” Proof added
“I was not.” Em said
“Yeah…ok
whatever you say man.” Proof said
“She was cute
though, she had three buttons undone at the top of her uniform.” Swifty said
“Did you see
her cleavage?” Proof said putting his hands to his chest as if he was showing
how big she was.
“I like her
accent, and fuck did you see those legs.” Em said
shaking his head
“Told ya.” Proof laughed
“So…you were
too.” Em pointed out
“True, but
hell I bet she’d look hot as hell naked.” Proof added. Eminem rolled his eyes and
looked at his menu. A couple minutes later she came back.
“Have you guys
decided what you want, or do you need another minute?” she asked sitting their
drinks down on the table. Then putting her foot up in the seat beside Eminem,
she had a skirt on so she didn’t leave much to the imagination.
“No, uh Ashley
I think we’re ready.” Em said looking at her nametag
“Ok what would
you like then?” she smiled flirtatiously
“Well, hmm I
want the chicken strip basket thingy, with french
fries not toast.” Em started, he watched her write it
down
“I’ll have the
flame grilled cheeseburger with pickles and mustard only.” Proof added
“Same here
except I want ketchup instead of mustard.” Swifty stated
“Ok I got it
ill be right back with your orders.” she said picking up their menus and
walking off
“Damn did you
see that?” Proof asked
“Fuck, she
must not have been thinking about it.” Em added
“I love this
place.” Swifty said and the guys agreed
~*~
“Here you go
guys.” Ashley said putting their food on the table
“Thanks Ash.” Em said
“You’re
welcome Em.” she winked and walked away once again
“Uh oh Em.” Proof teased
“Shut up man.”
Em said throwing a french
fry at him
(Later on….)
“Man what can
I do to get her over here.” Proof asked
“I dunno order dessert or somethin.”
Em suggested
“Aright, good
plan”
“Yo, waitress.” Proof yelled
“Dammit this isn’t
“Sorry.” Proof
said
“Yes, can I
get you guys anything else?” Ashley laughed
“Uh, yeah what
dessert is good here?” Proof asked
“Well the
Peach Cobbler is good. And the Butterfinger cake is awesome.” Ashley answered
“I’ll have
that finger cake thing.” Proof said. Ashley started laughing
“Anything for
you guys?” she asked looking at Swifty and Em
“Nah am aight.” Em said
“I’ll have you
to go.” Swifty said
“Umm…I dunno about that one but ill be right back with your cake.”
Ashley laughed walking away
“Fuck man why
did you say that?” Em kicked him from under the table
“Sorry, dawg it was the only thing I could think of.”
“Well than why
didn’t you keep your mouth shut you idiot.” Proof said hitting him in the back
of the head
~*~
“Here you go
babe.” Ashley said sitting the cake in front of Proof
“That looks
good.” Em said
“Yeah it’s my
favorite.” Ashley smiled
“Hey umm when do you have a break?” Em
asked
“I dunno why?”
“I was
wondering if you wanna sit with us for a few minutes. You know get to know each
other.”
“Will.” Ashley
yelled looking at the kitchen “Can I take a break?”
“15 minutes
tops.” he yelled back
“Thanks.” she
said taking off her apron and sitting down next to Eminem
“So what
brings you guys to
“We have a
concert in
“Cool, you
like the cake?” Ashley asked
“Mmm Hmmm” Proof said not looking up from his plate
“Told you it was good.” Ashley smiled
“So what are
you doing tomorrow…” Em was
cut off by his cell phone
“Hello?”
“We waitin outside.” Bizarre said
“Aight, we‘ll be right out” Em
said hanging up, he looked over and Ashley wasn’t there anymore. “Where’d she
go?” he asked
“I dunno she just said bye and left.” Swifty said. Em shrugged and they got up.
“Yo, leave her a good tip.” Em
said as they laid some money for the meal down on the table. Then they left
~*~
Ashley came
back a few minutes later and cleared the table picked up their ticket wrapped
in money and took it to the register. Then came back to finish cleaning and
picked up a napkin with something written on it and money wrapped inside. She
opened it and out fell a 50 dollar bill and two 10’s. She looked strangely at
the money and then read the note.
Ashley,
Hey cutie,
this is Em. I thought id leave you a good tip for
being gorgeous. Swifty and Proof left some too. Well babe, im
sorry we didn’t get to talk longer but call me sometime
606
248-0086
Marshall
(Eminem)
Ashley smiled
and slipped the money and note into her pocket. She’d defiantly call Eminem
later.
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